My Sage System is Too Overpowered for the Other World

As Shuri said this, Ultron seemed to come to that realization. Slowly, his face began to shift from determination, to realization, to humor. Rearing his head back, he began to laugh. Rolling over on his back, he continued to belt out a chorus of chuckles, his torso hiccupping as he grew more hysterical.

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The story has a rich world building and amazing characters that are well thought out and developed! The author possess a rich vocabulary and strong grammar skills, making the story an enjoyable reading experience. If you guys have a little bit of time, I strongly recommend giving this novel a try!

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Thank you for dropping by! This project is an attempt at writing in a fresh new style that is different from my other projects. I am so excited to share it with you guys and I hope you will like it! If you do, please leave me a nice review, and if there's anything you find that can be improved on, do drop a comment as well to let me know your thoughts. As always, thank you for your support! ♥