My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

At 25 chapters I would say that this is a good novel.

Pros: Cool/Intetesting system

Interesting system for all characters


Cons: Somewhat cringe dialogue

Characters not fully developed and feel hollow

Not the best use of the system imo

Personally not ruthless enough and like I said I feel like he’s not using the system to it’s fullest ability

While I stated a lot if cons, I like the direction that the story is going in and have no big problems with the storyline and the cons are all minor things.

I would recommend.

ill come back to read when it has 30 ch but ill leave this here to show support
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The story is good and fresh. Much better than other apocalypse or system novels. The only small issues I have are: Every character is shown as aloof, cold, emotionless. Such themes are repeated too many times in the story. Also, mc shouldn't have gone in the raid on vampire proginator, which is going on currently from ch 160+. He should have leveled up more. But it's a small issue.

The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.
Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.
Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!

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jk its very good i recommend reading it!!

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As much as I wanted to enjoy this story, the entire thing just seamed like a slog to get through with me having to skimm 30 percent of it. The positive aspects is the anti-hero mc who will do anything to progress, decent Grammer, and an interesting power system.The negatives is a mc without any purpose or real personality, A lack of any characters with purpose, and the fact that very few important plotpoints are expanded upon or have any lasting effect.

It's pretty dang good. I highly recommend it! (I would give it my sticker of approval but maybe I'll just hold off on it...)

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