So I'll just summarize everything here.1. Remember to stick to only one tense. It takes practice, and I still make tense shifts by mistake.2. Make characters consistent.3. Learn the art of description-- telling and showing. There are lots of guides in the internet.And above everything else!Never stop writing! Just don't stop writing. Once you stop, you really won't improve, so Don't. Stop. Writing.That's all~!
MC is not overpowered, the background is very solid, and it reflects real life. Hard to describe, but this novel is basically about reality and human nature
Just a waste of time, the plot is slow, sometimes I like slow plot but this is too slow, and the mc seems to be lacking braincells, the title is misleading as well, he doesn't add "Description" to his body, it is more like fusion, but he doesn't use it and the only time he use it is when the author want to make a small progressions in the story, the authors lack of intelligence is insufferable, it is more faceslapping than actual story progressions.
This novel is a worse version of Long Live The Emperor!I definitely recommend reading the other one if you like this type of setting. It's quite similar but a few things are better including MC, side-characters personalities, story, action.
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