My New Marvel Life

the author doesn't know how to portray the character and is very naive.

Story is good.
Abilities he wished for are also good.
But, my main problem is that mc is taking all of this as way to light. I mean he told Thor all about himself just because he was his favorite character, dude for you fiction has just became real and you are giving away info about yourself to people you just meet for the first time in life.
I don't like how mc thinks of world he lives in as comic.

it's nice, although you know the conversation is a little awkward and all ,but the idea of the tech and wishes is quite interesting , it's just if only there's more chapters .

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The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.

Le mc veut renaître à 18 ans et aller à midtown high mais c 16 ans midtown sale débile et c encore plus débile de commencer à 19 ans et pas comm nourrisson avec le net il peut ce préparer au menace futur facile et il a du temps
C un fic marvel pourri je déconseille à quiconque

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