Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
- The story is, seemingly, made without Ai. Whilst being of really good quality. There’s nearly no errors. - It's original, maybe there’s a cliche here and there, but it wouldn’t be a xianxia story without them. - The MC is realistic, whilst not being a mûrder hobo. - There’s an engaging romance early on that doesn’t feel rushed, and we don’t have to read through an MC being so dense that it takes 200+ chapters for it to develop. - He’s strong, but he doesn’t feel invincible, and while he’s not a coward, he’s still cautious. - His cheat might be the most original one of any stories I’ve read. The only real complaints I have is that there isn’t enough chapters, and that there are a lot of lengthy explanations in multiple chapters. And one thing I would say is that, instead of saying his avatars names, you should just say the position they have. Finally, this is one off, if not the best cultivation story I have had the pleasure to read.
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