After 120+ chapters I can honestly say this is one of the worst mc's of all time the mc has 3 of the most overpowered systems ever but somehow this author managed to make them completely useless the mc is a weak pathetic idiot there is 0 character development and most of the chapters are useless filler.
Usually, I like to read power fantasies but this is a weak mc disguised as an OP power fantasy mc. He literally has master grade occulmancy but literally EVERONE who is not dumbledore and snape and rando's can read his mind. Like WHY? 1/10
Worst fanfic i read in a while :( The mc got 3 systems but barely use them,he got gamer mind but it doesn't work at all,11 years since he is reborn but barely trained, follow totally the canon story(30 chapters and the only thing different is saving the mother of luna...),don't use is brain at all(know all the major plot of the hp universe but don't prepare at all(troll)),i could keep going but the last thing i will write is it's the worst mc i ever read about(1000+ fanfic read). Iusually don't write review but i take the time to write this one to tell people to never start reading this *****. Don't lose your time, you can find a lot better to pass time, and don't listen to the author who tell you that only the 20 first chapter are like this , it's all the f***ing story ...
Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10
Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10
Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10
The story is interesting and has good potential at the beginning.
The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good.
But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing).
Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis.
Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying.
Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days.
Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.
The Idea of bringing farm into another world system is really good. But when the MC start to going all friendly with canon MC and going gryffindork on sorting I stop reading. MC was like I dont want to be OP and stay low key but he was like I want to befriend harry and save people O.O btw he also share his secret including before rebirth.
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Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10
Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10
The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good.
But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing).
Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis.
Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying.
Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days.
Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.
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