My Magical System

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Fhrutz_D_Hollow
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Laurel Birrell
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    Hi, author here. I’m not shameless. This story is one of the best stories on this platform. Go read and see it for yourself.

    Though, don’t come ranting if it isn’t to your liking. Every person has his/her preferences. The thing you dislike can be the thing like by others.
  1. Mirabelle Raglan
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    an other one fell to the greed of absurd privilege. 50e to unlock all privilege (for only one month, while still needed to unlock each chapter.
    it's sad since I enjoy the story.
  1. Jacqueline Petty
    Jacqueline Petty rated it
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    I love how the story goes. The development at first is a bit shaky.  At first I thought the MC is too OP but as the story progressed it shows stability and balance. It is also my second favorite next to chrysalis(of course because it is FREE and not to mention the story is good as well). I would love to see it not in premium in the future or if it will I wish the quality stays the same or even became better.
  1. Berton Browning
    Berton Browning rated it
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    IT is a very interesting start, The way the main character first gets his game system is interesting and I'm happy for once, that the girl isn't a complete scumbag like in most stories. The grammar is strange in places, but you can tell this is from someone who's English is their second language and it's great and still readable and enjoyable.
  1. Leo Shelley
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  1. Franklin Zephaniah
    Franklin Zephaniah rated it
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    very stable with updates, and to be honest it is a good story. HOWEVER , the writing is a bit funky, and grammer is pretty bad. not to the point it's unreadable , it can be enjoyed with a bit of effort. mc starts out horribly stupid however,  and honestly the first 10 chapters will likely give you an aneurysm. character decisions do improve though.  highly suggest Author find an editor though,  it honestly the biggest thing holding this back.
  1. Beacher Alcott
    Beacher Alcott rated it
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    Sigh...The MC is stupid i really want him dead and change the character i just read up to chapter 140 and i cant continue anymore..The only thing i like is the writing quality and nothing else. bruhhh.. just bruhhh.. bruhhh..bruhhh
  1. Karen Susanna
    Karen Susanna rated it
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    Not a bad way to pass time but not even 5 chapters in we see the first plothole. I decided to review after reading all the free chapters out currently and that isn't the only issue, so many things are just never explained like how the MC's main class went from unarmed to cultivator or when he upgraded it from apprentice to silver rank. The series is called my magical system but the system is actually called the soul system that uses soul energy and he is a Cultivator not a magician.
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