My Lucky

Yumakap din ako sa mga kaibigan ko. Then sa kanila nanay, tita at ate leslie.

Yuuichi looks down trying not to cry, Bully 2 and 3 are laughing.

If you just read the three ways book how does know about Kim Dojo skill fourth wall

After reading so far, I did not find any problems at all. The grammars are and there seems to be no problem at all. The story was also very well written, great job author.

Overall, your grammatical structures has to be enhanced, and substance wise you need a lot of improvement, that was it for constructive criticism. And, lastly the author can do better, your updating stability it decent... Having an average of 2 chapters per day is awesome beginning...