It actually begun pretty well. The "system" is not too ridiculous (at first), and the first 3 reincarnations are fast enough not to be boring. But it all changed at the fourth reincarnation, where it is basically a copy of another novel and the deduction system is completely forgetten (about 30 chapters in and no mention of it).This, plus the fact that the mc becomes extremely passive for no reason. Disappointed to say the least, do not recommend.
I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates. The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC. He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting.Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that. While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 4The total score - 4
Itβs not your typical cultivation novel were the mc because a cold blooded killer by chapter 2. And the mc actually has development. I would recommend it to anyone looking for something new.
there is nothing good about this novel. its boring, a cardboard cutout of whats already been done before but there is a twist, he gets two rewards per check in, one for each bloodline. which makes of course no difference, like one reward through check in wasn't already op enough.i'll give it two stars. for those that have never read a check in system novel before, this might be a great story to read.
This is an interesting story. It, however, is moved mostly like dialogue with little description in it. Personally, I would like it described to me and not coming out and telling me directly.For example: In the first chapter, why do the maids think the young master is drunk? Could it be the smell? The author could elaborate on that and improve the story.I do hope that the author continues this.
"He's in floor A room 5, well if you wanna meet anyone else than their rooms are also on the same floor you can find them there" Eve replied to Eon as she was sure that Elsa was giving him wrong direction.
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