My Harem House of Horrors

kinda interesting idea for a story but the mc is just to much of gotta hide stuff and be a wimp, I read the chapters until now but I'm dropping this it's just too stupid with no development going on just always I'm great but I have to put up with my wife's family to make her happy when she's just a stuck up brat in the end

Very fun read, horrible translation. almost mtl............................................................................................

After looking back at the novel I feel thrilled about this experience. The writing is top-notch, at least to my taste and I loved how the scenes were depicted, although I was shocked by some of them. I am looking forward to its further development. The main character does what he considers right and the "system" doesn't affect his own thinking or ensnaring him like a snake (at least for now). I couldn't take my eyes off it. Of course, I didn't expect a family-friendly story, but this was incredible.I found one or two words that were mistaken for something else, but all in all, it's awesome and also rich in vocabulary. Keep up with the story and absolutely don't drop this gem, author.

The only reason I'm rating it so highly is because I want this Ln to continue but honestly I would rate it 4.7 it's not really unique in plot but the writing is a comfortable read and doesn't have any brain dead points yet (ch 40). Overall just a nice read with nothing truly unique but no demerits either, still interesting enough that you would enjoy reading it

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I enjoy the use of onomatopoeias (words to describe noise) in the story. Especially since it’s a story filled with Action. It’s also nice that we get to learn about Sage as he goes about his day instead of using multiple pragraphy just describing.

It is not a marvel but it is entertaining, now I will talk about the things that I consider that I do not like about this novel ...The MC is kind of silly, although mostly it is from not having knowledge about something, even without that it is. I have read more than 140 chapters and so far he is very innocent, enemies have already appeared that could harm him and his loved ones if they were not strong enough and still strives to have mercy not to "kill". In chapter 138 they made a clone of him and he considered that it ruined the romance, because even if it is a clone of him, it is as if he was someone else and it bothers me, I do not know if the clone disappears or they destroy it quickly at some point, I I would like a lot...From the last thing I just said, I have to abandon it, if someone knows if the clone disappears in any chapter, they can tell me.

So I read all the free chapters which was like 40 something. From what I could read, there is so much to work on, just in the beginning chapters. Author should go back and fix it and if the rest of the novel is like this then it's not worth reading in my opinion. Lots of inconsistencies and information being put out with no explanation like Magic. It hurt to read it and this is as far as I go. GL