it's okay autor is sometimes lazy in the early chapter , the story is also good the problem is him hiding his background and that It turned to a premium novel
Only 22 chaps in but stuff feels rushed and there are random jumps in between words. The grammar isn’t the best but it’ getting better as the story progressess. It’s a good book but there is a lot of stuff that needs improvement. Other than that no more complaints
I love this book and I'm glad I didn't skip it like how I wanted to earlier Skip it. It has surpassed my expectations, I can see the author's hard work in trying to make his book great and I applaud him. I like Alex as a character, even the plot is well organized. I can't say much but I highly recommend this reincarnation story to those who love this types of book, its worth the read.
Author here: I just wanted to make a novel with magic , action , romance, ecchi with a op MC with a Successful Harem. it's just a package of all.
I hope you enjoy it. I will try to upload regularly.
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The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!
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Author here: I just wanted to make a novel with magic , action , romance, ecchi with a op MC with a Successful Harem. it's just a package of all.
I hope you enjoy it. I will try to upload regularly.
Leave a comment It helps me understand the readers minds better.
Don't forget to share.
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