As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.
This story is great. The plot is fantastic, and the characters are very funny. In the half a year since I started using this app, this is one of the best stories I have read. Although, after each chapter gets out, I feel like I want more ten of them after reading it, I am okay with the speed of releases as long as it isn’t dropped before reaching its end.
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed.
By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters.
Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage.
If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go.
Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
The story's pacing is just about right without getting you bored if you binge it but i wish there was more detail put into world building since i sometimes get lost when a random concept or POV is on but over all a good read for so little chapters out
This is a good read especially if you came for a laugh when cultivation and op mc is what you are looking for.
I want to thank the author for sharing this good read with us readers and I hope he just continues making new chapters cause the story's concept is great.
;)
This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good.
The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking.
I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing.
I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)
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Great job, I hope you will continue writing for a long time.
By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters.
Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage.
If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go.
Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
It was such a good novel. I was beginning to like it and you dropped it.
Now I'm sad
I want to thank the author for sharing this good read with us readers and I hope he just continues making new chapters cause the story's concept is great.
;)
The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking.
I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing.
I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)