
My Family Mansion Has Mutated
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Author:
Old Mansion
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 21 votes)
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its either ive missed something while reading or this is just that messed up and idiotic...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The idea of the house being his avenue to success is something I haven’t read before but it does appeal, especially when he mentions there is over 40 rooms inside so there is a lot of room to grow in this story.
Anyways, it is early days and I would recommend this to readers to support and follow.
At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly.
It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.
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