Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.
So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?
This is a good novel with a great plot. Although the MC is winey at the start after chapter 20 he turns cold. all in all great novel so far. Hope author doesn't ruin it by adding a harem as they just slow the plot down and are badly written
A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel :
(-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book
(+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum
(*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events
(*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad
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Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible
Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read
[Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area
Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out
World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential
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Tips for the author :
- It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read
- Fix typos
- Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts.
then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world.
0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.
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either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one
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(-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book
(+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum
(*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events
(*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad
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Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible
Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read
[Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area
Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out
World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential
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Tips for the author :
- It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read
- Fix typos
- Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world.
0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.