My Demon Clan Is Too Capable, It's Automatically Launching Revenge

its bad
not worth for it to be picked
and story is okay some cliche
but translation is barely passable
and the emotions are too much
they look artificial not a true
looks like a newbie writer
maybe he/$he improved but the first 40 chapters are barely ok

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you need to do more research, golden core isn't powerful at all. this like first couple of chapters I'd full of you pushing to us that "ohhh ancient sect./ golden core powerhouse" no. golden core middle of the beginning levels its like a small boss that shouldn't fill a couple of pages worth just to push on to the readers "he's strong" lol. but good try.

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