My Defender My bodyguard

The reason I'm giving this a such low review is that everything is so simple and underdeveloped. The MC is op which is fine but the way you write him. He seems kinda single-sided. The storyline with Rumi needs to be developed more because even though they are soulmates they still need a more detailed love story. The writing quality is really simple, but it's your first fanfic so I can't blame you. I know that's it is hard to write them but just try to make the story feel real. The character design needs work to because Rumi seems like a simpleminded character.

So does Qiu Lan end up with Cain?  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Giving five Star since it was a PUBG novel that I really love to play. I just hope that the author would come back to continue it after I reach the latest chapter ^^

I've read to ch 41 as I am reviewing this. It is pretty good so far, the  story is decently paced and the mc isn't a complete idiot and neither are his teammates or the competitors. I'm excited to see where it goes.

Anyone who is a fan of classic Sci Fi should read this book. Also fans of classic whodunits cozy mysteries or not so cozy ones. We'll worth the read!

beautiful novel, I hope it won't be abandoned..................................................................................................................

"This isn't about me, it's about you two!" He cheerfully redirected the conversation. "Are you going to…?"

Naruto: "Anyways introduce your team to us Konohamaru."