The story was very detailed. It was good. I like how the author made it. It was like a professional estimated novel. Good for the readers who can understand better. Notw: I skipped the news and more. I scanned it. 10 for the scene. 8 for the dialogue. Over all almost 10.
Waiting for moe ;D. To be entirely honest, 'realism' is not really my cup of tea but this novel is definitely not something ordinary <3. Keep up the good work and write MOAR
This is my Review of the Story......It's a good read for Beginners who are okay with the Tags and description given in the chapter and don't think that deeply about certain things...Writing Quality: 2 star ★★There are mistakes in grammar, wording, phrases and such but not that difficult to understand..Story Development: 3 star★★★Pacing is very slow but it's alright because the ending of the story is just apart a small mistery of MC's origin, other than that he just have to take some more girls and powers..Character Design: 2 star ⭐ ⭐ At the start it was going okay but at later it turned out to be bad especially MC(👎) I don't like MC's personality that much in most cases..Updating stability: 5 star★★★★★Author is very good at this 👍.World Background: 2 star★★As of now (chapter 315+ something) the details of the world are not that good needs more work on it like places, things and such.......I'm just here for the plot, some powers and artifacts other than that... .Maybe a Spoiler for some people so... :....MC's personality turned out to be worst in later chapters, well depends on the people reading that, but (for me) his personality turned out to be sh* very bad at a certain chapter and him being passive against his girl is a totally different thing that is even more of a let down but I'm still reading this cause of plot, powers and artifact settings.....Still it's a good read for Beginners. 👍
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