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Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.
What a poetic way of narrating just one scene, I liked it.The first chapter does not explain anything but leaves the reader in suspense and floods with great interest to know how it continues.Overall, it's a pretty good opening chapter if you want it to be a long story.
Its been long time I enjoy read novel. Thanks a lot for the cure. Reading is my things and I love it. I give 5 stars for satisfy me this entire time. P/s : why only female got side story? I don't like read much about female story. (Too much cry here and there.)
"What is your name child? Come let's get you to the hospital" I cough "Big sis my name is Marix but um shouldn't you get dressed?" She only now realizes she was about to rush out in only a towel. Her face turned very red. "Ah yes." She takes me into the woman's dressing room and began to get dressed right in front of me "Hey don't stare like that. Turn around!" She reprimands me. 'D*mn show is over'
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