5/5 d(=^･ω･^=)b
Wow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿
Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ)
I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^･ω･^=)v
The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
This reminds me of books I used to read as a kid where you have to pick whether the hero does one thing or the next and if you're not careful your choices end your reading.
The writing is great, the world background is enough to paint a picture in your mind without cluttering your mind with too much detail. I tried pacing myself to read a little each day and now I'm caught up with the latest update
There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly.
The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.
However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense.
This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.
An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
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Wow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿
Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ)
I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^･ω･^=)v
The writing is great, the world background is enough to paint a picture in your mind without cluttering your mind with too much detail. I tried pacing myself to read a little each day and now I'm caught up with the latest update
There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly.
The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.
However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense.
This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.
An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
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