My Chaotic City

    Author: Phantom Moon Shadow
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.9 / 5.0, 17 votes)
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  1. Chasel Evelina
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    i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it i recommend it
  1. Dana Maurice
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    I like it had a mostly original concept and it lived up to that concept being tower defence + town building + a little classic player schemes
  1. Patrick Keats
    Patrick Keats rated it
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    A bit slow but well written with steady growth pace. This is a tower defense novel, and our MC is the city lord. If you enjoy strategy than this is for you.
  1. Fabian Harvey
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    Mr. Editor please choose this book!
    Mr. Editor please choose this book!
    Mr. Editor please choose this book!
    Mr. Editor please choose this book!
    Mr. Editor please choose this book!
  1. Charlotte Surrey
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    Interesting premise of a Tower Defense game and the shenanigans that the MC gets up to while being the overlord for his city/tower defense. MC has the fairly typical archetype of being a scrooge while having some innovative ideas and getting by on a decent bit of luck.

    The character development currently is a bit shallow but it is mainly the world building phase with a number of different people interacting with the MC so it is understandable.

    The MC is a bit unique as his goal within the game is not to earn money - honestly one of the first gamer novels when the MC isn't ridiculously poor/greedy.

    The MC instead is 'casual' and aiming to have fun which shows in the novel in later chapters with some unique developments.

    The only issues I can really see is the some pretty thick plot armour with the MC getting some quite valuable things very early on - so for people looking at this review I would recommend to not take things to realistically.

    The other issue is the setup for outside the game is a bit dull with the dialogue usually the standard tropes you see in Chinese web novels - doting 'aunt' type character, person looking down on MC etc.

    The translator has done a good job with a fair balance presented between keeping Chinese slang/proverbs which provides some charm to the novel and keeping things digestible for a western audience.

    If you are into video game novels I would say check this out and I hope that this novel gets picked up as I am looking forward to future updates!

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