I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.
i bet it's a guy with an encyclopedia in his head and whatever he reads that is true goes into his encyclopedia.mic droppedhuuuuh.please have a smart mc.
Sorry, my review is pretty bad. I read this and wasn’t laughing at all. I don’t dislike the writing and it gets pretty hectic at times. I don’t see this as hilarious and I find myself wondering why everyone laughs at some parts. I don’t get it. The story is okay, well- written, cliched and epic. But to me, the comedy is non-existent. If you are looking for laughs, I cannot guarantee you will. - In terms of the types of reviews I’ve seen the average triple ratio is 90% found it funny/refreshing. 5% found it not hilarious. 5% is other.
Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.
This is an extremely well-written story with few to no grammar mistakes(as far as I can see) and has close to realistic world-building. The only flaw I would say is the lack of chapters.
Suddenly becomes super racist from Chapter 114. How is it possible, you ask? I was as just as surprised that the author was able to include racism into a cultivation novel.Essentially, the author made white people the demons in the book and goes off on racist rants.Complete disappointment.
Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order...One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times.Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :]The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!
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