This story had lots of potential until 1. author created a ridiculous plot armour that keep saving him in critical situations and the plot armour makes no sense2. The main character have little emotion doesn’t3. The main character is a saint who never kills those who wants to kill him4. The academy makes no sense i feel that it holding him back he shouldn’t have join the academy5. The story is repetitive for example there some crazy villain who are jelous of him and want to use everything in his power to destroy him but after heing defeated by the protagonist a few times the become protagonist underline which makes no sense as they have powerful backings who can literally destroy the protagonist6. The villain are brain dead they have many ways to make mc suffer and destroy him but they chose the most idiotic way which is to fight him one by one head on I feel like the villain can kipnap his aunt and threaten him that would make it more interesting
too many plot holes. how is it his friends are keepin up with him in lvls...... feels very dull reading vr part. i only was happy to read the irl part of the novel and i dropped it.
Honestly,It was a pretty good read,definitely a good story but it feels a bit rushed.Take my Word for it,Read it and It's quite interesting,not the best but a definitely a good read
I like this book so far since it has a very unique concept. While it does have a "system" (Like all the new books that are coming out) it is unique because it has some sense of Architecture and Comedy in it. I just hope that this series is a long one and not one that ends quickly.
La historia me ha gustado hasta ahora, lo que sí me tiene preocupado es la reencarnación, si bien ya e visto novela de este tipo que amagan con lo mismo pero pasan 100+ y no cumple su objetivo, ojalá el autor no prolongue esa tan ansiosa reencarnación, hasta ahora tiene sentido que el mc haga cosas sin pensar en las consecuencias, después de todo su objetivo es morir.
Merchants are always at risk in the hope of cutting a big "jackpot." If they succeed, they make a profit of 500 or even all 1000 percent. But the risk is very high with 10 caravans going along the Silk Road, three of them have been robbed. It was necessary to pay for the protection of the “bandits”, to buy the “tamga”, the security seal. From the first chapter, the author managed to generate interest in the novel. Read on ...The mistake of the authors is that they describe past eras, approach them from the point of view of modernity. That is, do not "enter
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