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Great concept with lots of potential. The   best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!

its so good, I love it alot, the plot, the idea  suudhdhdhfhdbdjdhdbdbfbfbfhcjfbfhxidhduudbfufjfjfjcuchdjdhdud rhfhfhfbf fhfjfhf f haha xhdhdbdjd

absolutely love the book