The reincarnation story is not as realistic as the title suggests, but for a green writer, it isn't bad. I love the new Dojutsu, but I find it completely unnecessary when he already has Mokuton. The baby should have been traveling with Tsunade and Shizune after the death of his parents. Backstory I made up: some Senju parents (Tsunade's cousin is the father) leave the village to live safely away from the shinobi life and death. The mother gets assassinated during her pregnancy after the sudden death of her husband. In this story, the being saves the child by having Tsunade walk by and reincarnates you instead of the baby that should not have existed. The mother still dies because this is her fate one way or another. I mean, this is important for the creation of a relevant main character. I believe that the writer would have had an easier time with the story if he added only the Dojutsu to the mc. No need for a headache to sort the backstory, if you know what I mean.
The story starts off a little lacking but quickly gets better you will definitely like this story if you are a real Naruto fan. Reading this story has been a bit of nostalgia. I felt the same way I did as a child watching the anime for the first time. What made it even better is it is not centered around Sasuke.
I'm really interested in this novel completly my type, if you know what I mean ;). It would be great if you could keep up the uploads like the last few days and increase the lenght of the capter. I will be waiting for new chapters, also thanks for taking your time to write this novel.
A lot of inconsistencies in the story. For instance the exchange rate between ingame currencies such as silver to gold, The number of quest items needed, the amount of money gold can be exchanged for in the real world, and many more. there are also gramatical errors such as calling a male character her or a female character him. The story isnt bad if you can get past these issues though.
A post-apocalyptic Isekai story with the classic system is nothing less of intriguing! The story elements is there, but the writing needs a bit of improvement as some phrases were a bit convoluted and the tenses got mixed-up. Other than that, this definitely get's a place in my library! An amusin read!
Great job, I am on chapter 10 now, and loving it. It is wonderful to think such a romance can start so fast, and smooth, even with the imperfections. Though sometimes what starts with a flame, rapidly burns out, should be interesting. It is wonderful how Yue is able to learn fast, grow stronger, and make profits so quick, in peoples hearts we often wish we could do so. It is like living an adventuresome dream.
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