Moving After Marriage

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Wtf??, what is happenning? Why are there Original Novels spawning in here now? Is there some kinda bunch of bonus and stuff?!! Anyways so this novel is kinda new to me, because it uses a girl as an mc to a vrmmorpg novel so maybe it will be good. I am really expecting some ******* of usage of her skill as a mage who controls winds I really hope she is creative enough to unleash the full potential of the thing we breathe in.

horrible, so difficult to read and has braindead characters

A interesting read that remind me a little of 'Scholar’s Advanced Technological System'. However, there is no system and the MC instead gets a one-time INT boost. It was a massive boost, but the rest of it depends on his own hard work. The novel isn't without some drawback but I hope to read more.

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this book is so underrated also PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

Review time!The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation.On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc.Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase.A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.

hmmmm, i like this novel more than pov author............................................................................................................................................