excellent work mate i really love the story the characters Everything is exciting . I have read the episode of the funereal many times and it still makes me laugh That fella chrono is awesome it just like he figured everything about the world he really gets it keep posting man I really get an addiction . keep up the good work don't take your sweet time
gotta be honest the gramma is Bad, Story needs editing and pls too much Young master this Young master that too . it Had Potential but after the first 8 Chaps it got pretty fast boring
I encountered this story in wattpad today while looking for stories to read and when I read the 11 chapters available there I looked for a different app with more chapter and found it in webnovel. I really love the story. It's very interesting.
all I have to say is that this MC is literally to worst MC I have ever read about, he literally ticks off all the boxes I hate about different MCs all in one horrible package, other then that thou the novel could have a lot of potential but its impossible to read cause of the shitty MC
Me encanta como se desarrolla la historia como ben con el lider y todo lo demas me encanta la historia deberias subir mas capitulos seria increible espero que la historia tenga mucho apoyo
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I am awarding it five stars since, I loved this novel. Minor/unnoticible Grammatical errors. Overall quite perfect. The novel is edited before publishing. Great!!!
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