good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers
Loved it ❤❤❤ Hope fully getting to know you better through your poetry.Keep updating yourself .keep working on your goals 😇 .aww***wwwww how you have evolved my dear.
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This is possibly the best original story on this site. Not only does it have a solid cast of characters, but its MC is consistent. The author avoids common pitfalls when writing especially in this genre where they focus too much on gathering female followers that they forget to give them a personality. He also makes it plain that the MC is clearly antihero, so if your into that stick around. I've got nothing else just read it it's well written, good characters, a solid and expanding story and a world you can really dig your teeth into.
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