I love the idea of this novel. Its very well written and the concept is not new but its nicely done and put together well. I only wish the author posted more chapters faster.
I would so love to rate this story as a 5, however there are some key issues that ruin this story for me.
The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.
The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.
The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.
The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.
The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.
Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
Slow life mc in early chapters.
And apocalypse in late chapters!
Will he get harem?
Will he became a king or leader? Like God And Devil World?
Is he will take his siblings to his harem in the future?
In fact, for now I like the novel ... In short, it lacks a bit of grammar and has some errors (not as much as others I've seen, MY EYES ARE LOST ALMOST!) I think if you fix it and focus a little more outside the MC, also if you post more often haha all great (even if the latter is not necessary) thanks and excellent work.
I disliked him back in time, I would like him to lose his whole family because family is just a burden ... @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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I like this story...Please don't drop :´(
I like this story...Please don't drop :´(
I like this story...Please don't drop :´(
The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.
The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.
The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.
The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.
The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.
Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
And apocalypse in late chapters!
Will he get harem?
Will he became a king or leader? Like God And Devil World?
Is he will take his siblings to his harem in the future?
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