I have read till chapter 5. It's an amazing story. Although, the English is a bit broken, I can understand what you are trying to write. Keep up the good work.
I really am wondering why this novel doesn't get enough features. it's one of the best on webnovel buh, don't worry author, once you get contracted, your novel will get higher visibility and I promise alot of people will really love it. nice work
Hello Author here. I'm writing these review just to say that the story might still did not meet any of your expectation but still. The prologue finished at chapter 10 so the real story start from there. I might have to rewrite some of the chapters sometimes so I hope for those of you are reading can give a positive respons to you all. Also, with the way i'm writing i'll say i'm... not gonna put much metapor like some 'Professional' writer. Instead, I'm writing these story to make you all understand the paced of the story.
Decent novel by far, the author may not be the best but he/she is trying to improve. Up to my reading status. the story is pretty decently paced but it might be a bit fast for others. Still, keep up the good work.
I have read 20 Chapters by far and I must say the stories are written amazingly... And as a fellow newbie author I must admit that the versatility of the characters are just admiring.
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