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the pacing is a little quick but good for a web novel. could help to be a little be generous with describing the monster girls and maybe add some more banter between the MC and his system .
This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.
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what can i say? we know what we came to read and we get it. putting that aside the world that is being built has my interest as well for its uniqueness.
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Also I like your story. Good job
the pacing is a little quick but good for a web novel. could help to be a little be generous with describing the monster girls and maybe add some more banter between the MC and his system .
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Kualitas menulis
Memperbarui Stabilitas
Pengembangan Cerita
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latar belakang dunia
Tarif Keseluruhan
5.0
Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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