Monster Apocalypse: A World Invaded by the Monsters from Another World

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i will do my best to read this since it is so short, but i did read the first few paragraphs, and i do not know if the writer is writing this for a 3 year old child or a 30 year old ivy league adult. he tries to use intellectually large words that do not seem to be within his normal and  domestic vocabulary.... but also realizing it is his first book again i will try and see and either repost or make a new one with more detail.

i really hope this isn't gunna mc tryna to team up with a lot of ppl or he just mr nice guy (u dont have to listen to me u can do whatever u want

I havent read this but I want to give you an site which has many novels similar to yours and I hope you can find inspiration there. Royal Road.