Monopolize My Mysterious Wife

Big Maggot God looked at the house made from pizzas and said, "No problem, I could eat an entire house made from pizzas if I wanted to."

"can you repeat what you just said to me?".. He said with fury obvious on his face

"Sharingan" - said the captain as he jumped from the dragon's head and ran down the slope of the mountain.

Only shooting stars break the mold

I started enjoying the story at first but later on It felt quite tiring to read because of the dialogues, the writing quality took a dip and All of a sudden the novel read as if author forgot how to speak English and the pacing was just blitzing through I couldn't even enjoy the development. Overall it was an ok read, I mean it wasn't revolutional or anything like that, I just read it cause I was bored if the author can just brush up on his skills a bit more the story would be much more easier to digest.

I like the writing style, it's easy to imagine and it feels like I'm watching! I can't wait to see more interactions between hale and her father!!

To much surging the MC, and I hate the system that seems to want the MC to die

not bad it's a start, still needs some level of work but it's good