You definitely feel as if you are the mc. It has a good foundation from the start. Needs a few minor tweaks, but this does not take away from the story or flow at all. Has a really good start and for me a unique outlook. Keep up the good work author!
Demon beasts were animals that would attack anything and anyone entering their territory. Unlike the demon race, who were mostly like humans and were friendly with them on most occasions, the demon beasts were not. There were some demon beasts that could be tamed, like the fire lizards of the scorching sun sect.
Brock: A new challenger, welcome Ash. I'm Brock the gym leader accepts your challenge. It will be 2vs2 gym leader can't switch Pokémon only the challenger can switch Pokémon are you ready Ash.
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