Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin

I think the MC is an idiot of some kind.

Don't judge first read it.

I don't know about later but it feels like the MC is a 12 to 13-year-old kid.

Too much extra talking, too much drama, No hard work is done here.

He has only suffered in the first chapter, there was no mention of him trying to learn anything.

He is just lucky for no reason.

He is still a kid after suffering, as it is said Maturity comes with suffering too.

He was too hasty in his decision-making.

I don't get it how can a regressor be an idiot?

There is no information on Floor 0 or where the commoners are staying is it Earth or is it that earth is destroyed?

Too little information before the boss fight!

Thanks for reading the review, I hope you think about it.

Have a good day

So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel.
Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much.
Nice pace, too.
A hidden gem I would say :)

First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so  I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.

The book just started and I can already tell this is gonna be a fun read. I know it’s a bit premature to write a review when only a single chapter has been uploaded but I’m gonna do it anyway.

Nothing more to say really, I’ll write a new review later on when more chapters are written.

Not too good.
I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe.
Comedy aspect is lacking.
I didnt connect to the characeters

here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review.




this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah
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I have to say, the first chapter was well written. I also do like the concept of a sin system, it's very unique. I can say that , from the first chapter and the unique concept, this novel has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, so wil keep an eye out for further chapters.

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2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!


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