so he got transmigrated, found his job too hard, didn't bother to learn and manage it, pushed responsibility to his father then kept collecting the money, now he's slacking off in vr. there's harem tag too? I can already imagine the kind mc this is
Hi there, Author-Nim.
After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review.
Here I explain why.
1) Writing Quality
This book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.
2) Story Development
The pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.
3) Character Design
The character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.
4) Updating Stability
It's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.
5) World Background
Kinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.
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After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review.
Here I explain why.
1) Writing Quality
This book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.
2) Story Development
The pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.
3) Character Design
The character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.
4) Updating Stability
It's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.
5) World Background
Kinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.
I hope you do better next time.
- Eien Warui.