I have read up to chapter 8 and I believe it's enough for me to review the novel.
Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.
Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.
Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.
Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.
World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.
Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.
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Love the start. Quite a funny main character. Love your work author. I like comedy. Keep updating love to read more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ahem, cough cough! Just read three chappies of the book, and think it definitely deserves a nice review. Sigh, not many things to criticize the book for, so let's start with praise.
The books main character is quite interesting, comedic actions and profane, ahem! vocabulary, make a very good goblin. Not gonna talk much on the death of the protagonist, too comical to be dark.
First three chapters were nice with good pacing, narrative and descriptive quality. Although some errors were spotted, those can be fixed easily.
The author did a good job with the execution of this story, kudos.
I don't exactly see why the reviews made thus far hype this novel up. The writing quality is decent, but I noticed grammatical issues in just about every paragraph. The update stability is, from what I can see, not great. The last chapter released to the public was 11 days ago. Story Development is actually the best part of this novel, I even gave it 4 stars. Put simply, the pacing is good and I enjoyed reading for quite a while. The protagonist is fun, but other characters feel rather robotic. World background is a generic RPG situation, not much to say.
Overall MEH. Felt no intensity in intense moments, and can't really relate to any characters.
I have been read this webnovel till chapter 67 and so far, I wanna say one thing "I feel bad for the original protagonist." And this novel feels like reincarnated as a vending machine but less cringe. Rest is ok.
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Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.
Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.
Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.
Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.
World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.
Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.
I'm a fast reader, so it did not take me time at all to finish it, and now the hunger is killing me...
The books main character is quite interesting, comedic actions and profane, ahem! vocabulary, make a very good goblin. Not gonna talk much on the death of the protagonist, too comical to be dark.
First three chapters were nice with good pacing, narrative and descriptive quality. Although some errors were spotted, those can be fixed easily.
The author did a good job with the execution of this story, kudos.
Overall MEH. Felt no intensity in intense moments, and can't really relate to any characters.