MMORPG : Ancient WORLD

so i have bought all the chapters out so far (60 chapters) and i have to say, so far its pretty good

everything is great so far, the mc is very intelligent and he has so far been very good at planning everythin gout with his future knowledge and is unlike most reincarnated mcs in which they usually just give up at some point bc the future has changed to much and now just goes with the flow

its also refreshing to see that the mc actually gets in trouble here and there and doesnt have any super strong op future character that he would later need to save come help him out of the blue(so far)

at this point in time id say i would continue to support this story and would very much like to see where it could go in the future so i would like to reccomend it to any who are curious and would like to give it a try

Great novel. Engaging with great realism

Has some standard stuff in it's world building and some cliché. I like how a lot of the leveling and ranking works similar to reincarnation of the strongest sword god. The spelling and grammar messed up a few times but it got a bit better in later chapters. The way skills and some items worked weren't really fleshed out in the beginning but it has gotten better and things seem to have more explanations which is good. Overall pretty good novel so far.

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Excellent Novel...............................................................................................................................................

Especially in the beginning of the novella, let's say the first 50-60 chapters, the writing style was very dry, you could tell that you had no experience. I even wondered if it wasn't generated by artificial intelligence. After that, an undertone began to appear in your writing. But you keep using the main character's name every other sentence...which is very annoying. Use synonyms, speak for him and not in the 3rd person.. there are many options to avoid this annoying repetition. Regarding your writing, in general I like such stories and therefore notice quite a few cons that you could emphasize. The battles are very lean, and the character development is fast-paced. The same goes for the dialogues, which are trite and emotionless…There are also a lot of actions, events that have no logic... such as the watcher, which supposedly cannot be interfered with, and at the beginning it was shown how the contracts under his supervision were secure, but then it turned out that it was not so... which completely contradicts the concept, making this belief absolutely nonsensical. Chapter 291 Revealing The Truth, you say how he wanted to share the responsibility and that's why he trusts gamers he hasn't even seen live. You absolutely trashed your good idea with your organization, you could easily have built it based on mafia organizations or terrorist organizations. Not to mention that there are other secret organizations where they are in different circles. The more you reveal yourself to some, the more vulnerable you become...In order not to ramble on, I'll give some examples where you can see combat mechanics, dialogue, and the ability to keep the reader in suspense. For example Reverend Insanity and Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God. Of course even they are only a good attempt compared to true masters of fantasy, such as Steven Erickson or George Martin.

This is just a hidden gem, ignore the haters the world building is just awesome, I'm at 227 so yeah i know what  I'm talking about. This story is awesome