Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside

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Great story all very detailed in mini details is one of the most beautiful stories I have read on the science fiction genre and reflects everything. And I'd like to suggest putting some romance into the novel. Thanks a lot for this great story anyway !!!!

the first chapter opening with a war scene.. it's a nice start actually.. I have read all the chapters highly recommended Good luck author,

I thought at first it will be a little bit difficult for me to read since it's sci-fi but it's proven wrong when I start to read the prologue and first chapter. It feels like I'm watching a movie. I'm already in love with it!

Oh, and I wish the author(s) good luck on the Spirity Awards, tons of luck for this book!

Your synopsis grips me first, then the prologue which really explains everything to come in the book. Though sci-fi is not my cup of tea but when I see a good story I won't hesitate to dive in. Well done on your plot development, the well-detailed description of your characters and scenes, it really progresses the plots. Also, your grammar is good and the plot moves at a steady pace.

I really love how exciting this is. The prologue really had me hooked and I'm so hyped to know what happens next. I don't think I've ever read a webnovel with a cyborg mc, its so unexpected. I'm glad this isn't clichéd like he reincarnated as a game character or something. The detailing of all the weapons and sensory alerts make this a really awesome read. I wonder if our mc is going to gain emotions later. I'm really curious to see where this goes. Keep posting chapters Author, I'll be staying tuned.

I love how dramatic the prologue is! It makes you shoot questions like 'what's happening? and such. I like it because it's unique and u really did an excellent way to describe, so I totally dig ur writing.  The main character really makes me curious about him. I've always liked sci-fi so consider me hooked to this! :D

So you can only read the prologue. And I think it's one of those prologues that aren't boring. You did a great job at that. It ended with a cliffhanger which will most likely attract reader. I wish you well on the competition.