Military System god realm revolution

I am giveing this much because I am just starting it I will change it later
I like world story and mc background but I request the author plz don't make it a harem novel
Now a days Harem novels Prety boring so don't make it harem or romance

An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults.

Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes.

The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update.

Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.

I don't really get why the reviewers on the book says its unreadable or maybe because ive read many Google translated novels straight out of raws that my capabilities to read and understand book has numb my preference in translation
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-so the writing quality is average for me nothing stands out in the translation not  that it gives me headaches trying to read it or anything
- the story development for me is so very fast it gives little to no room to breathe always having enemies to defeat one after another, i was thinking why does the story have to force it to become dependent on the military cant the people cultivate ive read that some of his officers cultivate since one time an officer enter the shadow of mc however why don't they have cultivation and the military system fuse to strengthen the army very big plot hole and the mc already have top cultivation arts at his sleeves but the author forces mc to have some excuse so that he can't cultivate the first cultivation art he got was very fine the biography clearly mentioned that the one who cultivated the art just got defeated because she was besieged/ambush and was only seriously injured not dead so it means that the devour martial art was very powerful i think it was the top martial art of the whole world the author doesn't expand much upon it but said one of the top but the drawback that the power of many people that the devour martial art absorbs doesn't mix well then how does the previous owner not just die upon cultivating it and become very powerful on top of that
and the second martial arts was the martial arts of the guardian which was the strongest cultivator on yhe world im sure we as the audience wouldn't want to have a castrated mc although powerful so the author makes the mc have an excuse to not cultivate the second martial arts as to not become castrated however another thing the mc stated that mc wants to cultivate to the point he would risk his life to jump on a cliff so im sure the mc would cultivate the devour martial art straight away even though was warned a little about the drawbacks and the devour martial arts should have something mentioned as to how mix/fuse/balance the absorb/devoured power since the martial art is top martial arts and why doesn't the mc focuse on researching the martial artists powers, martial arts, the body of of martial arts, body of beasts, body of demons how does the demons cultivate, bloodlines and many special materials like spirit plants , spirit materials/metals analyze them using super computer and AI and im sure the super computer has higher computing power than the martial artists it should be able to analyze and create many things not just analyze the boat and make a shield of it using electricity

This has definitely become one of my favourite novels to read after becoming tired of most of the novels these days. The grammar is not the best, but it is definitely readable and the story is worth it. If you find factory stuff satisfying and you like to see soldiers in a cultivation world with guns, try this novel out. It isn't rushed and you will see the impact of our modern ideologies in another world.

A tip I would give after reading up to chapter 25 would be to view capital letters as the start of new sentences. Also, sometimes lists are missing commas. Other than that, read with imagination and creativity. There is no romance or weird behaviour so far, it's pure content.

Would recommend.

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A história e incrível, o tipo de leitura que e viciante, simplesmente sensacional, os personagens são bem estáveis, e coerentes, porém quero ver personagens de outras etnias e o autor pode usar pontos positivos de outros impérios, e desenvolver mais o resto do mundo, mas acredito que isso acontecerá com o tempo. Obra incrível simples assim.

This story would be good if it was properly edited. I understand why other reviews call it a MTL, i.g. it is barely readable. I understand how it may be unique, but consider My German Empire and Out of Space. These novels do this concept way better.