I think you have a good book going here, the character is decently op, he's got a relatable backstory and the setting is just right. The fighting is pretty intense, I can tell you have a love of martial arts from it. I'd say you gotta keep writing, however, you gotta pace the story, make it flow with the reader, and work on the book's grammar, otherwise, you have got a great story!
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Please put a tag as a racism so readers know it beforehand.Also promoting a dumb racist MC in the story.Don't know how webnovel couldn't get a decent novel instead of these craps.
This review is after reading the first 50 chapters during the trial period. All I can say is - this novel is extremely boring.First off, let me state that I'm not a big fan of Sign In novels. I've always found them to be a really boring type of system, copied from some of the worst free-to-play games. However, I went into this novel with an open mind, willing to give it a chance.The main problem with this novel isn't the Sign In system, but just that it's so incredibly boring. It's written more like a documentary about the life of an immortal, rather than a story of the events around the hero.The author has no sense of how to create tension or suspense in any scene. The MC is an almost emotionless doll that never reacts to anything around him, he's always lost in his own world. Even on the rare occasions that he gets into a fight, he has an utterly deadpan personality, and it feels like I'm seeing the author write about a walking piece of tofu rather than a human being. The fight scenes aren't completely worthless, as the MC uses a silly fighting style similar to One Punch Man, where he kills everything with a single punch, but even that just feels boring because there's no strategy to the fights. The fights get over before they've even begun, and most of the time the MC doesn't even know why the fight happened in the first place, because he's such a boring blob of tofu that he doesn't care to find out.Another serious problem with this novel is how it tries to badly ramp up the drama through scenes where the MC does an "amazing" task in front of other disciples of his sect. The problem is that the author has no idea what's actually impressive to look at through the eyes of a reader. For example, he spends several chapters talking about how "the MC dared to take one more step" in order to obtain treasures or walk on a lake, all while a crowd of background characters keeps shouting out how absolutely amazing it is that the MC can keep taking that step. It feels very artificial and forced, to the point that I want to puke just thinking about it.On the positive side, because the MC is so utterly bland, some of the side characters appear more relatable. There's a female character, a senior sister, who's actually wiling to listen to the MC's advice and words, and there's a senior brother who takes him seriously and accepts him as a rival on the path of cultivation. The problem is just that they're still incredibly shallow, up to the point I've seen. Rather than have independent personalities of their own, they feel like they were specially constructed characters created just to make the MC look better.The story tries to show us that even for a genius MC, it still takes hundreds of years to walk down the path of immortal cuktivation. While that's a nice mindset to have, the problem is when there's nothing at all happening during all those hundreds of years.TL DR : It's a boring story about an unexpressive MC doing nothing but cultivating for hundreds of years.
The Translation is great, the story is SH*T;Great start, but keeps tormenting the MC FOR NO F*CKING REASON!Just extra characters so that I can post this Review, if it wasn't for the translation quality, and stability of updates, I would give this novel a 1 star!
This book is very interesting, I won't lie. I'm not a big fan of reading but Clinton Gene has me booked! I can't wait to read his other books. This author is so underrated. The public needs to discover his work as well.
Read what was free. Story progressed at a steady pace with ok character development but with so many new people added so quickly it’s hard to flesh them all out personality wise and to gain any attachment to them. Grammar is ok but the story switch POV and also from 1st to 3rd person mid chapter is confusing. I don’t normally go for stories with so many other povs especially all the time like this story. The world building can be expanded on more especially geographically as they travel through the forest. The buildings and villages also aren’t fleshed out well. How many houses are there where are key features in relation to each other etc. MC is ok so far not a hero but not a villain just a normal guy so far. His ability isn’t very unique though but the sharing of abilities is a nice twist at least. Wish you luck
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