I love this story! So far my favorite part is when the dark lord system talks and I love that they made the points spell out Abnormalcy. This story is both creative and funny.
it starts off really great, a few plot holes but not big or bad, but tha. later on they start happe ing more and more, like how he is supposedly as powerful as a high level knight ut he has to poison people to win a fight eve. though he is also highly trained in a lost sword art but can't take on two low level guards because it's not worth his tike to rescue some slaves even though tactically speaking it would be better to have multiple people running in different directions to give a false trail.... just kinda lost me. Story feels forced.
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