Halo reader, i wrote this review after writing 70+ chapters and read hundreds of comments. So here is my honest review on my own work.1. Its a slow start, i know the trending novel are currently a fireworks from the start. OP item or skill, etc. This one is a classic weak to strong novel. Even i dont really like the MC at the start. But i assure you it will change.2. As much as it said historical, its not really true. It based on real world history but its still a fiction novel, so hope you enjoy the alternate earth.3. The world and characters are the one i am confident with. i took a lot of time on them, but you can be the judge of that.4. The grammer and writing stability should improve much from my last novel as i have more experience now. But please be forgiving if there still some mistake, as english is my second language.Please give the novel a try and hope you can enjoy the adventure of Emery and how he became the earth's greatest magus.
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If anybody has read "record of unusual creatures" then the background story of the xyrin empire is closely related to the xiling celestials before they attained godhood. which is interesting cause this makes it look like it is a prequel to what happened before record of unusual creatures. Noice.
"No, you don't have to." "But I will feel bad for making a woman pay for everything when we can pay for ourselves," Shang Ying insisted. "Can't we just split the bill? Please?" Li Nang continued to say. Seeing their persistence, she suggested, "How about y'all pay for the next meal the three of us have together?" "Then the other person will be third-wheeling and plus will the person you didn't choose, will they still be friends with you?" Li Nang asked.
"Hahaha, Paul, come on. We're all for it and we just need you to say yes. I don't know, give her something to see if she's capable or something," someone whispers something to him. "And this time without traps, I hear you've tried to get rid of her before," oh, wow, I have no idea how that got out, and the surprise shows on my face. A good thing because Bikle looks at me with a frown. Oh, don't look at her, Paul, she hasn't said anything. She didn't need to. You know, we're not just monkeys being sent to space. And we care about the people who don't want to see us crash and burn. Paul, the new board meeting is reconvening in a short while. If Katherine is not at NASA anymore at that time, I will make your life a living hell," what is going on here? I know the starmap is important, but it's not a that level. I start to ponder about it and Cassie gives me the answer.
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