I really enjoy your book. lavender is my favorite although Tilly is not far behind. you constantly are updating and upload chapters daily which is really nice that I don't have to wait so longggg 😖
Author Here; Supporting his work as usual. This is a promising novel for many, if you have a knack for a lot of fight scenes, game setting, rankings war, guild wars, kingdoms wars and even some wars that trascend the balance of equality and are transcendental, this novel is for you. Of course, while it may seem as though romance has no place in the novel from the start, I'd say it's quite romantic. Hmm, what again? well I don't have a proofreader yet but I can promise the errors are minimal, of course getting a proofreader is something I'm working on. If you are interested too you can contact me on discord.
Personally, I think confidence and morale are critically important. I placed this review here just to reflect that.As of now, the story isn't really face-paced. Ideally, I think it would be better to increase the pace but I also don't want to compromise too much on the details or risk creating plot-holes.I do re-read and check things to minimize the plot-holes as much as realistically possible.I also take constructive criticism very seriously. I will try to incorporate every comment that seems feasible and beneficial for the story's growth.Overall, this is a long-term project with a lot of potential.
Good book but the MC is useless, he’s dumb (maybe even autistic) , cowardly, he’s a beta when it comes to females and gets dragged around by the plot. To be honest this story wlulf be way more interesting without Liam, he brings nothing to it and instead ruins it with chapters dedicated to him just to never change. I enjoyed most other characters, they’re mostly 3 Dimensional and entertaining but I can’t bring myself to read another chapter of Liam being a r3tard, I lose braincells every chapter.
At this instant, the color of his eyes were slowly turning red. He felt that he was no longer fearful of what may come. He was starting to get irritated by their actions, constantly popping out their heads behind the trees.
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