wow!!!
what a novel! Your plot is simply wonderful.
The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.
clap for your author.
keep up the good work.
I would keep reading.
Ok, untill now I have read 9 chapters and the story is getting wholesome. the concept of the story is wholesome. I think the plot will get wider. The suspence is good. The Idea is good. I can hope this story will get to its highest quality but author need to work on the dialogues. Though it can be overseen since it is your first. But overall mindblowing story. Recommended!
The concept in which the novel is revolving around is good. But its good to improve on your Writing as character development and dialogues are getting butchered in between. hope you do well.
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what a novel! Your plot is simply wonderful.
The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.
clap for your author.
keep up the good work.
I would keep reading.