Talentless writer who has managed to craft one of the most mindnumbingly boring and repetitive stories you'll ever see. Do yourself a favor and look elsewhere.
Just reading the synopsis - 7 chapters a week (webnovel says 3).Guy die-revives decides to play a game. (OK. Why? Makes no sence.)Has a female lead tag, says a female character gonna appear later.. What? When? A single sentence would be enough. Or is is gonna reveal all the deepness?You gotta give more credit to the guy actually made your cover not just put his name in between a bunch of plain text, almost got it missed.Somewhat put a patreon link in there, with "addition to the story"? Not even going to comment on this.Worst of all - gonna delete undesired reviews because it is a "premium" novel. Whatever that means. If it is the webnovel's definition about "premium" it is nothing to be proud of.. Something else.. Then wow.I've seen people doing this "non constructive comments removal". It's just the worst possible function on here. Not all five star novels are good.Got this featured on log page. Might read/might not. If the novel's quality is the same as its description, better not.Best of constructive I could. 😘
um author why does the plot changes in chapter 70 it's like one piece but you're a marine what happen to the game I mean. .. no offense but why did you change the plot I was so looking forward to the night forest but great story my man keep it up
What about Undead type Monster? Thats too much monkey i think, But there is no monkey d luffy or monkey d garp lol . I suggest to add some monster like Undead or something.
Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not?So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it.I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid"That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters. Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time. Love ya all💞
a great novel keep it up ....................................................................................................................................
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