This story has more potential than it is utilizing. It's a great concept but nothing is being developed. what the system is capable of and why he is devoting effort to it isn't properly explained. Mind you this is a review only based on content I currently have available to me. It jumps into simulations that he has 0 input on for the most part with seemingly random exceptions. The growth of the world is not explained well and might as well be jibberish with little to no real breakdown in the evolution of the world. This is not a review about this being a bad novel even though it sounds that way it has potential but was taken out of the oven to soon and is still a little raw.
I love this novel, Many novel have crippled MC at start, but within few chapters Most MC get cured and power up like super Saiyan. It's unique to see a MC struggle for so long. The world background is also great, it's chilling imagining his stay at A class for one day, the ruthlessness of the upper class after blackout was just too much and it showed us the glimpse of the true world background up close.This MC is unique as he struggling with all his family and his family is also struggling with him, they also showed great support to him while struggling with their own agenda . his families are not just for show in few openning chapters, and their presence is still great for the overall development of the novel, as they appears in chapters regularly. but update period is really lacking ...
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Good novel, compelling.Suggestion: Make sure to flesh out who teleported him back in time later on. You could introduce a bit of fantasy or magic realism/sci fi into the novel. It would help your novel be way more compelling than all the stories in where this happens for no reason. Please try to think of an overarching plot that includes this.Overall 5/5 for now. enough said, added to library.
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