This story is pretty good so far, in fact it seems like it might be a REALLY good story. It reminds me a lot of Coiling Dragon. But it’s a more rough I guess? A lot of cultivation novels are basically constant face smacking and womanizing MC’s. Coiling dragon had some faceslaps, but because it wasn’t forcing face slaps down us readers throats, among several other reasons, it’s a really good novel. This seems to be a kind of mix between the two, but it’s leaning more towards coiling dragon. I’m so tired of the Mc being called trash constantly for 10 chapters straight and then being called godly for 1 chapter or so, and cycle repeat. The city lord guy doesn’t immediately try to kill/torture MC because he accidentally touched his daughters boob, but investigates the situation. He also doesn’t immediately ridicule and call MC trash for not having a high cultivation at age 20. Which is a big thumbs up for me, it means characters in this novel probably won’t have the iq of a fucking coffee table with 0 foresight. All in all looking forward to it’s future.
The cultivation system has a unique twist while at the same time not, I enjoy it a lot. There is no grammatical errors, and the writing is great, I would definitely recommend this book.
Very good novel with great character and story development over the first 75% of the chapters. The ending is sadly rather abrupt and badly planned, and the quality of writing noticeably decreases towards the end.
I always love the concept of a virtual reality novel. But the popular ones so far pisses me off and irks me, The first few chaps were a lil confusing and I feel like author missed a few words or sentences that were absolutely needed for the smooth transition of main character but aside from that alls good. Hope author keeps up the great work.
I really like it, its got a lot of action and the characters are cool in their own way. Its very interesting and mysterious. Thanks for updating. I look forward to finding out what happens.
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