It's cool to find a tree that holds a different world out there. Though both worlds the MC lives in are all waiting for war. Too much conflict, isn't it?
Writing is good but needs editing. Update is accordingly done. Pace is relative. MCs are brothers, right? But I haven't read yet about Goshi's Yin wielder brother yet. He was mentioned in the synopsis. World setting elaborately described.
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The author has great creative and imaginative skills. All the thoughts about story are well portrayed in the novel. The character design and the emotions every character feels are well described. The background of every place is also vividly explained. The writing too is easy to read without much hassle.
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I did like the book a lot, couldn’t put it down - only in the end (not the actual end) there was a twist that - for me - hadn’t to be there. A part from that it was the perfect book.
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Writing is good but needs editing. Update is accordingly done. Pace is relative. MCs are brothers, right? But I haven't read yet about Goshi's Yin wielder brother yet. He was mentioned in the synopsis. World setting elaborately described.
The author has great creative and imaginative skills. All the thoughts about story are well portrayed in the novel. The character design and the emotions every character feels are well described. The background of every place is also vividly explained. The writing too is easy to read without much hassle.
Keep Going!!!