Martial Transcendence

From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription.

Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!

I loved it very good, incredible, the story and plot are very good and the plot twist very interesting, I really liked the character of the protagonist and the heroines, the harem very good, I recommend it More will not be regret

I never thought this story would be this good.....I can't compare it to others as it's my first but colour me impressed, specially the character design of Di Chan and the world design.

As much as I've read till now it's definitely promising. Starting from the concepts, characters, grammar they all give off an exciting vibe. Well, we only have 3 chapters till now. I'm still waiting for more chapters.
Keep it up, Chandu mah boi

I don’t read novels much, but yeah this one looks promising. I think I found a gem hehe. We need more chapters.
Keep it up!

What happened to the novel and the author? someone knows? DROP?



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For now the story is really good i just hope the author is gonna keep the good work and keep updating us i dont want him to drop this story !