I feel this is a great novel, but from what ive read the biggest point of dissatisfaction(for myself included) is the portrayal of the relationship of the MC and the Female lead. The twist in their relationship comes off very sudden and unlikable. I think this is mostly because we spend the entire story up until this point not liking and being aggrivated by her. I think that if the reason behind her betrayal was something the MC agonized over more and maybe asked of her yet recieved an answer that set up room for a future relationship but didnt fully answer the question we would see her in a different light. This is more effective than the silent martyr style she used because we never liked her in the first place. The way I view what was written is that she was a cheating scumbag that was rightfully hurt by the MC, maybe tried to kill him, as well as a lucky piece of crap that benefited from his reincarnation. Then it turns out to be a red herring and she was actually trying to protect him. Maybe if she tried to reach out to him in the past life but he constantly denied her or if she told him she felt like she deserved to be punished but doesnt regret what she did. If the relationship wasnt shown as such an open and shut case of revenge I think it would have flown better.
Novel is good and if you have time you should watch drama adaption as well though it only has 1 season for now next 2 are planned in following years 2021 for season 2 idk about season 3 but it was announced it would have 3 seasons
This story already has the potential to be my favorite IET story. The MC is the type a guy you'd like as a friend. The world is interesting and the combat is dynamic. Characters are interesting and cliches like dumb young masters or and all that garbage with "face" aren't present.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really enjoy this story, it has really good potential and it seems like the author is avoiding plot armour by having the MC handle his problems himself for majority of what I have read so far, but it just feels the world hasn't been built up to what it could be and seems like there are characters that you see once or twice and it seems like they've bonded with the MC but then it seems like they're never to be mentioned again
Guys just a warning this book is on hiatus and has been for months!!! read at your own risk, though i must say it was a really good book, shame the author has gone away and is unlikely to return.
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Very very Dog-**** start the earlier chapters just plainly showed the author just put what he wanted and it was very inconsistent as well, character building yes there is, character design? My answer to that is negative, I mean why design a bloody ass S-ranked reincarnator when his experiences are just plain ****, can't be used. I mean the boy has no determination, no perseverance, no traits whatsoever that should be shown before he was reincarnated with his memories. I mean not just that, the grammar isnt getting any better at all like what the actual F***. The Author says that he is training his writing skills, truth is, he says he is Brazilian and we should forgive him for typos when he gives absolutely no fucks about improving and just says those at the end of the chapter to have an excuse at not correcting his grammar mistakes. He hasn't improved at all and I don't know how people can manage to give this a 5 star I mean full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, hypocrite-like author and worst of all he doesn't even bother improving and just uses excuses.
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